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PostSubject: Miriad "Miri" Tatsumaki   Tue Sep 17, 2013 4:57 am

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Miriad Tatsumaki

---In the end we're all just chalk lines on the concrete...
drawn only to be washed away...
for the time that I've been given, I am what I am.---




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Birth Name: Miriad Tatsumaki
Shinigami Aliases: Miri
Gender: Female
Age: [275 - Looks 22]
Birth Date: June 13th
Rank Status: Lieutenant

Affiliated Division: 10th Division


Appearance:

Physical - Miri isn't the largest of girls, she is petite standing at 5'2". Her skin color is pale white and her hair is a dark brown. Her chest isn't particularly large but isn't flat, and her hair is long, reaching down the her mid-back. Miri's eyes are easily her most striking feature, they are large and brownish orange in color, the most interesting feature however, is she has a darker orange ring around the middle of the outer part of her iris, this gives an interesting effect to her eyes. Miri's hands and feet are small, but proportional to her body.

Clothing - Miri wears two dark brown ribbons in her hair, one on either side. She doesn't show it, but across her back is a tattoo of a woman with bat wings emerging from a crevice. While on duty, Miri wears the basic garb of a shinigami, with a few minor tweaks, instead of the white socks worn by most shinigami, she wears black stockings that reach up to her thighs, and the skirt of her kimono is cropped shorter than others. Lastly, her wrists are adorned with long brown ribbons. When off duty, Miri is usually seen where brown and peach colored clothing, usually very frilly and adorned with lots of ribbons and similar accessories.

Personality: Miri is best classified as a Neutral Good shinigami. She follows orders for the most part, but will improvise according to her own feelings if she feels it to be necessary. Her tendency is towards goodwill, but she looks out for herself more than others. Miri tends to be quiet, but she loves to be social as well, because inside she has many thoughts and opinions, she just has trouble voicing them. She isn't shy, she is just quiet and a bit awkward. Miri takes her duties seriously, but also values time for recreation and the like. She is responsible and tries to prove herself to both those above her and below her in rank, she tries to prove herself to all people, both socially and regarding her prowess as a shinigami. Miri is very accepting of people's differences, as she sees everyone as unique. One of the things that can set Miri off is bullying, and forcing one's opinions on others. She believes everyone deserves their free will and their own choices and opinions to make, so when she sees them get discriminated for these reasons, she grows angry. Of course other things set her off, such as disrespecting her and bossing her around, as she willingly takes orders, but she expects some form of gratitude as well as kindness. Miri is surprisingly laid back in social situations and is down to earth.

In other people, Miri values acceptance, someone who accepts her the way she is and treats her with kindness is instantly respected by Miri. In turn, she values other people's respect towards her needs and feelings. She values kindness and mercy, and especially values when one is able to bend the rules for the sake of the greater good, as she believes the lawful way isn't always the right way of doing things. In others, Miri looks down on cruelty and discrimination, as well as valuing law over goodness. She dislikes when others are greedy and rude, and she thinks everyone should be equal on a social level. Because of this she often seems rude to those of nobility, talking to them as if they were a normal person just like her. Many mistake this for disrespect when it is in reality a sense of respect for all people, rather than just a few.


 
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Miri's fighting style changes as her sword does. In it's sealed state she uses a standard one handed combat form that focuses on strength more than agility. When her sword is in it's released state, she uses the same style up to about stage 5 in it's growth. From there she adapts to the sword's oversized blade by using a radical style. She holds the blade backwards, letting it drag on the ground behind her, from this point she uses a great deal of spins and flips in order to put the oversized zapakuto where she wants it it takes alot of effort considering the fact that the blade is about the same size as her by the time it reaches it's final stage. Either way, she focuses more on power than agility.


    Shunpo
  • Level 2
    Hakuda
  • Level 2
    Reiatsu
  • Level 2
    Zanapakuto
  • Level 2
    Kido
  • Level 2




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PostSubject: Re: Miriad "Miri" Tatsumaki   Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:34 am

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Looks good for the most part.

However, you don't mention your character's birth.

People in Rukongai are either humans who died and moved on or they are born there.

I realize she doesn't remember, but it'd be nice if you at least mentioned this fact.

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PostSubject: Re: Miriad "Miri" Tatsumaki   Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:45 am

I vaguely hinted that she died as a human, but her life as a human is clouded in her memory, lol, I can just flat out say it if you want?
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PostSubject: Re: Miriad "Miri" Tatsumaki   Tue Sep 17, 2013 6:04 am

No need, I deem thy APPROVED.

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